Feb '25 • Copywriting ✍️
Please get out your scalpels(or machetes), dissect and provide feedbacks!
I am helping to introduce a device for improving hygienic care of bedridden patients in various types of healthcare facilities. Here is an innitial copy for your assessment and feedback: Bathing bedridden patients is hard… this makes it easy
Hey [First Name],
What if you could bathe immobile patients directly in bed—without moving them, without multiple caregivers, and without exhausting your team?
With xxxxxx, facilities are:
✔️ Reducing bathing time by 50%
✔️ Eliminating heavy lifting for caregivers
✔️ Keeping patients comfortable and clean without the struggle
Worth a quick conversation to see how this could help your team?
Best,
[Your Name]
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Please get out your scalpels(or machetes), dissect and provide feedbacks!
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