Latest update to this part of the tune. This time with the B section and the corrections in the A sections so astutely pointed out by . There's nothing fancy here just the straight melody played in time with a focus on clean and clear notes. I think there are still a few spots where I could sustain a note just a bit longer. I wanted (needed?) to get it very stable before exploring any embellishments, decorations or rhythmic variations. At this pace, I found it surprisingly easy to lose concentration and lose my place.
As usual, any and all feedback is appreciated...