Many community owners donโt know how to create a clear offer/bio that attracts members to their community.
Some people only write their introduction, while others list too many outcomes. Both approaches are ineffective. Your offer should be simple, clear, and focused on one main result.
Hereโs the structure your community offer should follow:
- ๐๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐บ ๐ข๐๐๐ฐ๐ผ๐บ๐ฒ
You must clearly describe one main outcome your audience wants to achieve.
The more specific and exciting the result is, the more valuable your community will appear.
Example:
- Lose 10 kg weight
- Make $10k/month
- Learn modern calligraphy the fun, easy way!
2. ๐ช๐ต๐ผ ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐๐ผ๐บ๐บ๐๐ป๐ถ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ผ๐ฟ
Your offer should clearly communicate who the community is actually for.
This helps visitors quickly understand whether the community is relevant for them or not.
Example:
- For coaches and creators
- For beginners who want to grow on Instagram
- for menopausal women to lose weight, get healthier and regain their confidence!
3. ๐ง๐ถ๐บ๐ฒ ๐๐ฒ๐น๐ฎ๐
You should mention how long it typically takes to achieve the outcome.
This makes the result feel more realistic and achievable.
Example:
- Build your first online community in 30 days
- Learn the system to grow your Instagram in 60 days
- Launch your first digital offer within 90 days
โ
๐ฆ๐ถ๐บ๐ฝ๐น๐ฒ ๐ข๐ณ๐ณ๐ฒ๐ฟ ๐๐ผ๐ฟ๐บ๐๐น๐ฎ
Dream Outcome + Target Audience + Timeframe
Examples:
- [Your Community] is the fastest way to hit $1K/month with freelancing or agency work.
- Your Soccer career starts here! Get seen, get signed and see huge improvements in as little as 90 days.
- THE #1 community for menopausal women to lose weight, get healthier and regain their confidence in 60 days.