Hey fellas
I just put together a Google doc file with 4 email drafts + polished versions side by side — designed to help all of us write better welcome sequences that actually convert.
I’d love your honest feedback:
✅ Which parts grab you instantly?
✅ Which lines feel weak or confusing?
✅ Any tweaks that would make these more persuasive?
Your feedback won’t just help me — it’ll help all of us write stronger copy that gets our dream clients to say YES faster.
Drop your thoughts below 🙇🏻— let’s level up together! 📈