Mar 14 • 🧠 Questions
Is My Offer Good? Feedback Desperately Wanted!😓
A lot of this will be run on the Skool platform, like payments.
This will be for people in the Los Angeles area
I am really struggling on building my first offer and would absolutely love feedback. I also am not sure the best way to find clients. Help would be so very much appreciated. Thank you in advance!
What I Do:
- I come to your business, script, film, and edit video ads at no upfront cost
- I run and optimize Meta ads to bring you 30+ high quality leads per month.
- No upfront cost, you only pay for results.
- Bonus: access to my community where I reveal how I structure video strategies and ads
How Pricing Works:
- Fixed Retainer: $3K-$5K per month for full ad management and lead generation.
- Pay-Per-Lead? (what cost) or...
- Revenue Share: If I generate you over $50K in new sales, I take 10%.
Who This Is For:
- Cosmetic Dentists (Veneers, Implants, Invisalign)
- Luxury Realtors (Selling $1M+ Homes)
- Medical Spas (Botox, Fillers, Laser)
- Business Coaches and High-Ticket Consultants ($5K-$25K Programs)
- Fitness Coaches and Personal Trainers ($2K+ Online Coaching Programs)
Why Work With Me?
- I guarantee 30+ leads in 30 days, or you don’t pay.
- I handle everything: scripting, filming, editing, and running your ads.
- I specialize in high-ticket lead generation, not just clicks and views.
- I have a performance-based pricing model, so I only win if you win.
Does This Offer Make Sense?
I want to make sure this is clear, compelling, and valuable to potential clients.
- Does this pricing model make sense?
- Is the guarantee strong enough?
- Any suggestions on a different niche?
- Would you change anything to make this more attractive?
- Anyone know of the best way to track this?
Drop your feedback below. Appreciate any thoughts on making this offer better.
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Is My Offer Good? Feedback Desperately Wanted!😓
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