The first version of this presentation is the presentation with the words and it shows how to do it step by step. The 2nd one I draw on to illustrate points when I do my 2nd appointment which is the education appointment where I present to the teachers. Is there anything that could be better about this presentation? I think there wording is too long. Is there anything else specific about this presentation that could be better? My goal is to help the teachers who have a need for secure retirement planning get a Roth IRA or IUL or do a 403b Rollover if they are over 60 and they are going to retire.