I'm sorry, AI can't fix your offer
You need to make it work.
Look, I get it. Your offer isn't converting, so you throw it at ChatGPT hoping it'll magically transform your 30% close rate into 80%.
But here's the thing - if your offer sucks, no amount of AI copywriting is going to save it.
The problem isn't your words. It's what you're actually offering.
The easiest way to fix this?
Follow the Alex Hormozi rule - massive value in a short time horizon.
And make sure it's crystal clear what someone's getting.
Instead of "I'll help you scale your agency" (vague, long timeline), try "I'll build you a lead qualification system that filters out tire-kickers in 2 weeks" (specific, short timeline, clear outcome).
Instead of "Marketing strategy consultation" (what does that even mean?), try "I'll identify the 3 biggest holes in your funnel and give you a step-by-step plan to fix them in 14 days."
Your offer should be so clear that a 12-year-old could explain it back to you.
If you can't explain exactly what someone gets and when they get it, AI isn't going to help you.
It's just going to make your confusing offer sound more polished.
Fix the offer first. Then worry about the copy.
What's your current offer?
Can you explain it in one sentence without using buzzwords like "optimize," "leverage," or "scale"?
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Samuel Odifa
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I'm sorry, AI can't fix your offer