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Commended Entries: First Announcement
Many, many entries this cycle, well beyond what we had anticipated, and the standard of the writing has made winnowing the longlist unusually difficult. Thank you to everyone who trusted us with their opening pages. The quality was so high that the commended list is longer than in previous cycles. We are releasing the names in no particular order, over the coming days, and a shortlist will be drawn from this group. Today, in no particular order, we are announcing: - Lies on Sale by Gabby Martini - The Impossibility of Eden by Harry Wilson - Beach Dog by Tom McDonough - The Breaking Point by Fiona Harriet - The Taste of Iron by Ramona Slusarczyk - Askar and the Witch by Nina van der Beek - The City of a Thousand Eyes by Angelique Talbot - The Melusine Murders by Jesse Weiner Congratulations to all of them. Many further entries, equally commended, will be announced over the coming days. If your name is not yet here, please don't read into its absence. Names are being released in the order we can write the posts, which has nothing to do with preference, and every remaining commendation carries the same weight as those above.
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Well done, everyone. I'm loving those titles.
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@James Blair me too!
Explanation of commended list?
This is my first contest where there has been a "commended" list. Can someone explain it to me? My understanding is that if you make the commended list it means your work was too notch, but then you are out of the running for placing. Is that correct?
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I'm not sure but I wondered the same myself. Hopefully all will be explained in the post.
One line pitch help (again) please!
Hello all, could you take a look at this and tell me if it would pique your interest? "Judy is a capable wife and an exacting mother, not the dependent old woman her daughters want her to be." Thanks as ever!
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Hi Cressida, my interest is piqued. I love a story where the MC is underestimated from the get-go. You've done a wonderful job of portraying Judy's flaw but I am curious as to the obstacle/challenge she needs to overcome. I think a few words to explain what hurdle lies ahead could make this pitch even stronger.
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@Cressida Evans they might be short but they are incredibly tricky to write. My own is driving me mad. ๐Ÿ˜‚ Have you read Elizabeth is Missing by Emma Healey? I find looking at how published books have been pitched by Amazon or Goodreads sparks ideas on how to structure my own. Goodreads did a great job of squeezing the essence of Elizabeth is Missing into a one-liner: An elderly woman descending into dementia embarks on a desperate questย to find the best friend she believes has disappeared. In just 20 words we know what the MC wants, her flaw (dementia) and the story question: Will she find Elizabeth? I wish my own was as clear and concise as that. Anyway, best of luck with yours. Know that you are not alone. We are all pulling our hair out with these one-liners :)
Date for Winners/Longlist?
Hi all! Anyone know when the long list/winners will be announced or if I missed it somewhere? On the website it says the winner's would be announced yesterday. (Completely understand any delays, just want to know when my anxiety should spike ๐Ÿ˜‚)
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I just came on here to ask this question. As far as I am aware, there is still no date. Does anyone know how they will be making the announcement? Will it be on here or via email?
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@Sherry L. It's possible, but I don't believe they've confirmed this is the case.
Discuss your Feedback
Hello! All Gold package customers should now have their feedback (let me know if you do not at [email protected]). This is a thread for discussion of your feedback, and to ask me any questions about it. Have fun! Edit: Others who have received Silver or Exclusive feedback also very welcome!
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@Issy McCann I am blown away by the level of detail and care that went into the feedback. Thank you so much for taking the time to go over my manuscript. Your suggestions have really helped to strengthen my opening chapters. As others have said, it was perfectly balanced with positive encouragement and constructive pointers for improvement. I'm so grateful. Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š
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