Hello @Jan Twomey This sounds like the opening of a compelling story or book concept, possibly a mystery or literary novel centered on family secrets and justice. If you’re looking to develop this further, I can help you shape it into a strong manuscript by refining the plot, strengthening the narrative voice, editing for clarity and flow, or proofreading the final text. Let me know what stage the project is at and what kind of support you’re looking for

@Jan Twomey i can be of help with you with that