Note: This has already been approved and I had a lot of constraints (brand voice, offer) and my client changes the CTA. Hey Becca, There’s 1 thing I avoid as an energetically sensitive entrepreneur: Building a business that only trades time for money. Trust me, I’ve seen where that leads. You think the only way to grow is to give more of yourself… And let me tell you that’s the fastest path to burnout and resentment. That’s why I want to share the business model that has allowed me to create recurring revenue… Without having to sacrifice the time I’ve set aside for my family. Because here’s what actually happens when your income depends on your time: Your calendar fills up weeks (sometimes months) in advance. You feel that subtle pressure to say “yes”… even when you don’t fully want to. Your days start revolving around your schedule instead of your energy. And slowly growth starts to feel like pressure. And the work you once loved? It starts to feel heavier than it should. Because your business is asking more from you than it gives back. That’s why after 3 attempts I finally launched the BW membership. Because a membership business allowed me to help more people. Without having to take on extra work and drag myself on a Tuesday. It creates the reciprocity that allows serviced based businesses to thrive. All while loving the work I do and spending time with my family. And it’s exactly what I’m going to walk you through inside my free workshop: Launch Your Membership We’ll map out: • the business model that actually supports your life• what your membership could be built around• and how to launch it within the next 90 days So you can build something that expands your income… Without shrinking your energy. If that’s something you’ve been craving you can save your spot here:

If you're sending 20 DMs per day but still getting no results. Then keep reading. Because chances are, it's not because your outreach sucks. It's because you don't have an outreach system that'll actually land you your next client. See... The competition in copywriting has never been this high. Thousands of other copywriters are flooding the same prospects' DMs as you. Good copywriters and bad ones. And the more competition there is, the better your strategy needs to be to stand out and land your first high-paying client. That's why outreach isn't just about consistency anymore. It's a whole skill you need to master if you want to build a solid copywriting career. And I'm breaking down the 8-step outreach system I developed after analyzing thousands of DMs and outreach strategies from students who landed clients. Watch it below. https://youtu.be/c_TUyPjq5NY?si=I5VjABdJtKOGR5YI You've heard of some of these principles before, but others are completely new... and I'm sharing them for the first time. So make sure you stick to the end, save the video, and apply every step thoroughly. To your success, Tyson 4D P.S. Most copywriters focus on volume. Winners focus on systems. Be a winner.

Not everyone but I see google docs with people wanting their copy reviewed. I see so much of "This is bad" "This is generic" "You wont this or that" Im just gonna say it: A lot of people want to prove they are good by calling out someone else for being shit. If you wanna share your opinion on this please comment.

Please let me know what you think, this was in November she was my first client. SL1: Why the $10k programs didn’t work (it’s not your fault) SL2: It wasn’t made for you, %firstname% You’ve poured thousands into courses, masterminds and coaching. Only to be told to.. “Post more. DM harder. Follow up till you get the yes!” But let’s be honest. Those tactics were never made for women like you. Because the truth is, you don’t need to push. You were never meant to chase – You were meant to attract. Selling doesn’t have to feel forced or faked, %firstname%. It can feel magnetic. It can feel natural. It can pull in the right people who are ready to say yes. Just so we are clear: You don’t need to be pushy to powerfully sell your work. You just need strategies that honor your unique way of creating! That’s why I created this membership. So you can sell with confidence.. Do it in a way that feels natural.. And with action-oriented training and live support. Join the membership here and grab the $222 Sold Out Launch free! This isn’t only a membership. It’s the space that will ignite your most potent voice! Cheering you on, Jaya

I need you to give me an honest review of my copy and suggest changes in the areas you feel are flawed. Your reviews would be appreciated. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yJo-Z8pD9FrxAOoRwgqOIZQV2zZ-7LBH56RFii1BLpk/edit?usp=sharing