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You’re not too late…
Every year, I hear people talking about: “X business model becoming too saturated” “It’s too crowded now.” “I missed my shot.” This is all just 💩. 2020 wasn’t the magic year. 2021 wasn’t either. Neither is 2025. The truth is, people win every year. If you’re not where you want to be right now, it likely isn’t because of the timing… I’d place a bet that you’re just too invisible and not consistent. So, get out there, Make some noise, Get put in the work. Tyson 4D.
0 likes • May '25
@Mohammad Hasnain The copy is great, but I feel you can improve on these 1. The WIIFM is missing at the start, The story is relatable but the WIIFM is not there 2. Also you could have named the community like 'Hustlers', 'driven' something relatable to success, also in this part " - A clear roadmap - Real mentors - And the mindset to finish what he started" you could write A clear roadmap that helped him reduce his screentime consuming content and instead he started 'dream state' This would be perfect, as user can relate to the struggle he is going through and the dream state he wish for 3.And finally create the discipline needed to build freedom. The word freedom is too generic I feel, instead you could have mentioned build your dream business or things your ICP wanted
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1 like • Sep '24
@Christopher Mantas AI generated but I've made tweaks that suits my voice
1 like • Sep '24
@Christopher Mantas can you particularly point out the areas for improvement ?, It will be much helpful for me to learn and address the issue
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FIRST AND MOST IMPORTANT: DO NOT CREATE NEW POSTS OR THREADS IN OTHER CHATS ASKING PEOPLE TO SUBMIT THEIR COPY. YOU WILL GET BANNED. WE KEEP THINGS ORGANIZED. From now on, Every week or so I will create a new post like this and you can submit your copy or outreach in the comments below. Other people will still be able to review it, And you can still leave comments to each other, While we make everything more organized. Here is the template for how you should share your copy: "<type of copy> in <niche>: <link>" Example: 3 Emails in the fitness niche: <link> Here is the template for how you should share your outreach: "<type of outreach>: <link>" Example: Instagram DM outreach: <link> Now share your copy and outreach in the comments below until the end of the week, And make sure you come here to review other people's copy & outreach as well! That's it for this update. Costin.
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1 like • Jun '24
@Ben Coumbassa Done my part in review, look into it
0 likes • Jun '24
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1F8CTxKVRNevlbzy3GK_PRWAPnN5x7Js9Kpe_hmGPq5g/edit?usp=sharing Refine this copy like a jeweler polishing a diamond
Idea for email copy if you're confused what to practice
"Angle: Invite them to purchase the $47 course titled “AI for Media Buying E-commerce Business Owners.” This course explains how e-commerce stores can effectively utilize AI technology to create highly converting ads, thus skyrocketing their Return on Advertising Spend (ROAS). Additionally, it elaborates on how they can save time and money on ad production, avoiding unnecessary wastage. Optional: Consider envisioning the future status of the reader, for instance, how your wife will appreciate you if you dedicate more of your valuable time to her" , Make an email on this topic and comment here on this post
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NEW: POST YOUR COPY/OUTREACH HERE [MEGATHREAD]
FIRST AND MOST IMPORTANT: DO NOT CREATE NEW POSTS OR THREADS IN OTHER CHATS ASKING PEOPLE TO SUBMIT THEIR COPY. YOU WILL GET BANNED. WE KEEP THINGS ORGANIZED. From now on, Every Sunday I will create a new post like this and you can submit your copy or outreach in the comments below. Other people will still be able to review it, And you can still leave comments to each other, While we make everything more organized. Here is the template for how you should share your copy: "<type of copy> in <niche>: <link>" Example: 3 Emails in the fitness niche: <link> Here is the template for how you should share your outreach: "<type of outreach>: <link>" Example: Instagram DM outreach: <link> Now share your copy and outreach in the comments below until the end of the week, And make sure you come here to review other people's copy & outreach as well! That's it for this update. Costin. P.S. The previous review thread will be deleted in the next 24 hours.
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0 likes • Apr '24
@Stevie Cray can you ?
0 likes • Apr '24
@Prashant Dubey To be honest, Your content is not intriguing enough to make me subscribe to your newsletter. Its too generic I feel ,Sorry if I am harsh.
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Monish Somasundaram
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Facebook ads expert and an aspiring copywriter

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