Thanks Mark!

Thanks y'all! appreciate the love.

Hey Mark welcome brother!

I think the first priority when making a page is the "feel" of the page. The feel is not about the conscious experience but the unconscious one. It is based on the expectation someone has and that expectation being satisfied. First and foremost, if someone is going to spend money, the "feel" has to be professional - as in, look like it was created by a reputable/established business. My feedback is that your feel is off. It seems rinky dink, kinda like it was just created by someone who is just looking to get started. The flow of the video could be improved, the testimonies aren't super specific, and you got things bopping around like a cartoon. Sometimes simple is better. I'd clean things up a bit and simplify the message and layout.