Took the feedback from the call yesterday and added some text and various sound effects to the video. Wanted to open the video with something eye catching so I did the video inside the text. To not detract from the visuals I kept the text low since this is a horizontal post. Let me know what yall think. Does the video still have the same emotional impact with the text? Any other critiques? I plan to post on Monday.

Context on this video. I forgot to switch from standard back to LOG lol, so don't judge my color grading. This audio really spoke to me and I'm here with my dad so I wanted to do it. I know it's on the longer side and I'm okay with that. Would love your feedback on the emotion. Did you feel the video with the audio selection? Thoughts on shot angles? I still have to add text so any recommendations on that is also appreciated.

Hey everyone! 👋 I’m Ravi, a photographer turned aspiring content creator. I shoot on a Sony A6700 and love capturing cinematic lifestyle and gym content. Lately I’ve been diving into video editing, camera angles, and color grading (especially with LUTs for gym footage). What I create:Right now, I’m building a style that blends cinematic visuals with real-life moments—think day-in-the-life, workouts, motorcycle rides, and creative lifestyle storytelling. What I hope to learn:I’m here to sharpen my skills in storytelling, editing flow, and advanced lighting techniques. I’m also keen to get better at shooting handheld without losing stability, and at creating consistent, professional-looking color grades across different environments.

Hello, I’m Sukhjinder Singh from Vancouver, BC — an aspiring filmmaker learning, experimenting, and creating through the lens. Passionate about storytelling, I love capturing raw emotions and dynamic action sequences. I’ve shared an intro video 🎥 and would love to hear your thoughts & reviews as I grow on this journey. 📸 IG: @kahlonproductions

Hello Team past couple of days had been overwhelming for me. Also FOMO had been hitting hard as everyone is getting better and better so I need all your help me get back on track. Please let me know your feedback on what can be improved or could have been done better. Thank you for your continued support & Appreciate your help and guidance. 🙏