Wrote my second Email today, need reviews.
Hello everyone, I wrote an email for a dummy fitness app today. I wrote two variations (Email 1 and Email 2) to see which one works better on client. My audience was college students/ busy professionals who can't take out time for gym and has subscribed to get updated from the free newsletter by the business. Please review both the mails and suggest where I can improve. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1729bdCDNcUKyLGQFeqUnz_1gvrtlcwvKuiDz4TIiFF4/edit?usp=sharing