Wrote my second Email today, need reviews.
Hello everyone,
I wrote an email for a dummy fitness app today. I wrote two variations (Email 1 and Email 2) to see which one works better on client.
My audience was college students/ busy professionals who can't take out time for gym and has subscribed to get updated from the free newsletter by the business.
Please review both the mails and suggest where I can improve.
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Mahi Garg
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Wrote my second Email today, need reviews.
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