Hi Jack - this is really great -but suggest a couple of small things about the order sequence so is clearer? Pehaps the expert @Jay Downes would give us some great steers here?? However - for my 2 cents worth - I'd suggest start with Hey - Are you a … (name the tradie type … - nice and snappy - matching the trade image with the words on screen) then say that you are too - based in Sydney and images of the trade you do - this helps build connection. Then explain the big idea - you've created an easy system spending only xx to get xxxxxxx -in your own business. Make it easy to understand and give it a boost by saying - thats a 25x return (or whatever the big number is). Then you say the AWESOME emotion - "lots of customers … lots of revenue - sounds great right? You could get a bit fun here - and then explain that you can do it for them… -and here's how - just reach out by xxx way .. Also perhaps you really get onto the benefits - easy, evergreen, great returns…. or do this on a retargeting or follow up ad Also -sorry if this is nit-picky - just checking is tiler spelt right - ( I dont think its tyler?) But looking forward to @Jay Downes ideas and think its a great start - well done -I'd buy it if I was a tradie in Sydney!!!

PS- I have absolutely no idea how to actually edit an ad or make the words on top so well done

- What system to use and best practice on how to set up the template - Tech setup and automations - tracking codes etc - Writing emails people actually open and click - getting the tone and message right

@Kirsten McIntosh @Mathilde Noordzij - as I understand it you can only do very basic emails from Wordpress /woo commerce- pretty much the order reply email after an order has gone through - not the lovely once a fortnite/ month engagement email. You can download your current previous customers who have shopped on your website Thats why you need maillite or mail chimp etc… I think this is right but I could be wrong here -am sure the guys will cover?? @Josh Hall & @Matt Earle

I love it too - quick question - do you actually sell cocktails? Yum! Its a great friendly angle - very authentic - maybe you could spell out the connection more with abit of alliteration to show more -ie… connection, coffee, chat, cocktails, cards, caring…. etc!!! Also your address is only got the street - where is Mailer St - so people know where they might find you?

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