Midweek Sentence Upgrade (Paste 1 sentence)
I’m starting a weekly midweek thread where you comment ONE sentence from your essay / PTE writing, and I’ll upgrade it into 2 stronger versions (clearer + higher-scoring). The 3 rules we’ll train: 1. One clear claim per sentence 2. Put the point early (cut the warm-up) 3. Swap vague words (good/bad/thing) for concrete nouns + verbs Comment below using this format: - Context (HSC / PTE + topic): - Your sentence: - What you want it to do (argue / explain / analyse): Optional: “What level are you aiming for? (Band 6 / PTE 79+)”