27d • General discussion
Midweek Sentence Upgrade (Paste 1 sentence)
I’m starting a weekly midweek thread where you comment ONE sentence from your essay / PTE writing, and I’ll upgrade it into 2 stronger versions (clearer + higher-scoring).
The 3 rules we’ll train:
- One clear claim per sentence
- Put the point early (cut the warm-up)
- Swap vague words (good/bad/thing) for concrete nouns + verbs
Comment below using this format:
- Context (HSC / PTE + topic):
- Your sentence:
- What you want it to do (argue / explain / analyse):
Optional: “What level are you aiming for? (Band 6 / PTE 79+)”
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Midweek Sentence Upgrade (Paste 1 sentence)
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