anyone?

@Mc Kelso let me give a critique the headline sucks I mean fr and the whole copy sucks it is not gonna convert you anything because it has old design, bad copy, places, conversion places and more on that... if you want to convert it into something valuable then try writing again from the scratch hope my critique didn't hurt you lol and yeah I'm a copywriter myself (not advertising myself) just to tell you I'm experienced will all the stuff and I'm the right person to tell you these things

@Oil Paint he just shared me some examples and said he wanted those emails in these styles so what am i supposed to do i can't ask this to him because he's a busy person he replies in 2-3 days

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CV2dK8mG3kG4kNmOCOjhHQViYtA77QSgRmwjFX5CFcA/edit?usp=sharing my first sales page

@Abdullah Kaleem You know what, if you're going to be consistent now, let me give you a tip - subscribe to the best copywriters (find them from ChatGPT by entering this prompt: "I want you to act as a master copywriter, and I would like to know the best copywriters in the industry who provide their emails" - Read their emails and break down 2 pieces of copy every day - Go to swipe.co and read Gary Bencivenga and Eugene Schwartz's ads and break them down - read copywriting books like Take Their Money, , Great Lead,s etc. (ask me if you don't have more suggestions) - Write every day for 60 minutes (no distractions) - Follow this for the next 30 days Rather than writing anonymous crappy copy if you follow this, you'll do twice growth