@Samuel Korubu bro this is so confusing to read make it simple with flow .worst thing to do is to confuse the reader.i dont know u pick its starting idea from client because the idea "While Americans are distracted. BRICS nations gained. 40% of the world population." dosent feel right .even if it is the way u present its not good.so make it simple easy to understand with flow.
it will be better if i can coment in file but here review.make it short and entertaining.use slow pacing for info and speed for conversation just like rolarcoaster ride. and start writing for real niche.