In almost 9 years of writing copy, the #1 mistake I see everywhere isn’t bad design or bad offers. It’s VAGUE language. Specific copy converts. Vague copy CONFUSES people and leaves them clicking away. Here are some EXAMPLES: Instead of: ❌ “Build a thriving coaching business” Say:✅ “Get your first 5 paying coaching clients without posting daily on Instagram.” Instead of:❌ “Improve your piano practice” Say:✅ “Learn new classical repertoire faster with a daily 20-minute practice structure.” Instead of:❌ “Grow your online community” Say:✅ “Attract your first 100 members to your Skool community using simple ads and partnerships.” Instead of:❌ “Become a better swimmer” Say:✅ “Improve your freestyle technique and swim faster in 30 days with structured drills.” See the difference? When your About Page is vague: The copy doesn't CONNECT with them! ...so they leave. That’s why I’m doing THIS: I'm offering the next 10 people who join Premium or VIP a personal About Page review from me. 5 have already been taken. 5 spots are left. If you grab one, I’ll record a 5–10 minute Loom walking through: - What’s strong - Where the copy is vague - Where you’re losing conversions - What to tighten or clarify - What to emphasise so your DREAMIEST members join! These are direct actionable changes you can make STRAIGHT away! Everyone who has received a review so far has already updated their pages. Yours could be next. 😉 Once the remaining 5 spots are gone, that’s it. Upgrade to Premium or VIP here → — Elise

If your Skool community ISN'T growing or monetising yet, what's blocking you?

601, a good omen, I think so 😅. Anyways, hello everyone. Im pretty new to Skool and this whole online education world in general. I launched a paid only drawing education Skool December 9th with not a whole lot of guidance or know how, so lots of trail and error along the way. Ive been wanting to find a Skool to join for while that focusses on what is offered here. This Skool seems like a great fit for where I'm at and what I am looking for right now. Happy I found it

I shared on THIS post that I would do 3 about page reviews when we hit 500 members. You guys voted (liked) the comments of the pages you found most interesting... Here are our winners: @Debra Verrall Sewing Boss Learning Lab @Kim Job ACTIVATE Your Impact @Giò Schoenmaker Zero-Willpower Habits I'm doing the reviews NOW and I'll post them in the comments. 🥰 P.S. If you want support with YOUR About page, plus growing and monetising here on Skool, you can upgrade your plan here to unlock a BUNCH of awesome resources + support (we have a special NEW VIP tier that's just landed!). P.P.S. THANK YOU to everyone who threw your hat (erm, about page!) in the ring for a review. 💥

Yippee, we hit 500 members... which means I'm reviewing THREE about pages from THIS thread. BUT we have a problem... We have a three-way tie for third spot. SO... If you want to help another member get a review, could you please: - Head to this post: https://www.skool.com/skoolcopy/can-i-review-your-about-page - LIKE the comment of the community that sounds most interesting to you! - BONUS: You're welcome to share your OWN about page link on the post to go in the running for the review I've got to head to swimming lessons with my kids, but I'll be checking back on the post soon! Hopefully there will be three clear winners, ha!!