Hey @Nayeem Khattak, I would rate your copy a 6/10. Your copy has a strong story and is very persuasive. However, it does come across as too overly dramatic at points which could mislead the reader and give them false perceptions. That's a thing you don't want to do in the medical industry. Some grammatical errors but that's solvable.

@Mayihlome Hotele I read through your email. I would give it a 7/10. some improvements with the tone being more conversational and lines being spaced out more to improve readability. CTA could be more precise so the reader understands what there getting into.

@Zakaria Baziz I had a look at your email i would give it a 7/10. Its attention grabbing but could be to harsh for some readers. should mix this email with more emotional and conversational ones. You need a stronger call to action to put eyes on your emails. Could do with being more empathetic to the readers struggles in the middle section.

@Josh Martin I gave you some feedback. id rate the email a 7.5/10. Great story and CTA. could improve in keeping the flow and improving structure. Also add some more credibility to your discord channel and course with examples of students succeeding from your advice. Hope this helps. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GNPGho4oeDEgUzqZyVY3Egca6wlwd355TjqqYSAfyUw/edit?usp=sharing

Hi @Luck Fischer you have to allow comments on your google doc.