https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SSIEq-8LTfzbJdp4cYLlAWoN3Gvk-3IE6rlTcZXUblc/edit?usp=sharing Can edit my copy and give useful advice Better if you list out my problems and solutions to make it better

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ahIU-tho6XaQ5UUlC-jp6G76yudyIptfIk2TtJfPQzc/edit?usp=sharing i kinda stuck while writing this, free to edit to make it better

Review my copy here https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UveLI-E07ch2WFBLs_9vAU9taGR2gTersDtsAImhHtI/edit?usp=sharing 🔥

Just like to ask, how you guys write cool SL & PV that makes people want to click. Free to share! 🔥

Guys, I would like your help to write the first sentence for this RepClock copy below by using https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ottfWrfGmWRXiFn_iiRp_HuAS8kPCXtlsP-oSytseSM/edit?usp=sharing as a framework reference. I would finish the rest and post it back for you guys to review, thx. 🔥 Just: SL: PV: Hey [First Name], [Write ur first sentence] INSTRUCTION Write an email copy for RepClock, a wearable fitness timer that automatically tracks your reps and rest time using motion sensors—no button pressing, no distractions. Just train. Target Audience: Men and women aged 22–35 who are into strength training, CrossFit, or high-intensity workouts. They’re tech-savvy gym-goers who hate losing track of sets or pulling out their phones mid-session. Efficiency, focus, and performance matter most to them. Many are fitness influencers or weekend warriors training hard between work and life.