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WRITE YOUR FIRST SENTENCE

Guys, I would like your help to write the first sentence for this RepClock copy below by using https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ottfWrfGmWRXiFn_iiRp_HuAS8kPCXtlsP-oSytseSM/edit?usp=sharing as a framework reference. I would finish the rest and post it back for you guys to review, thx. 🔥

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Hey [First Name],

[Write ur first sentence]

INSTRUCTION

Write an email copy for RepClock, a wearable fitness timer that automatically tracks your reps and rest time using motion sensors—no button pressing, no distractions. Just train.

Target Audience: Men and women aged 22–35 who are into strength training, CrossFit, or high-intensity workouts. They’re tech-savvy gym-goers who hate losing track of sets or pulling out their phones mid-session. Efficiency, focus, and performance matter most to them. Many are fitness influencers or weekend warriors training hard between work and life.

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