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Feature Forge - IP Incubator

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The Too Many Idea's Problem!
Anyone else drowning in worldbuilding details that are fighting for page time? I'm deep in Remnant Chronicles revisions right now, and I just spent two hours mapping out the political structure of hell... after the Fall! This will never really matter, it won't ever be on screen, nor can a 'fast paced' novel bear it. This is the trap I find myself in often, anyone else? We build these massive worlds because they feel real to us, but then we have to decide what actually serves the story vs. what's just writer indulgence. For a feature, you've got 110 pages. For a series pilot, maybe 60. For a novel, you have more room but readers still need forward momentum. I don't want to say the endeavor is a waste of time, because of course it all helps build a seamless narrative, but it still feels... like a waste, lol, because I'm never going to use it! ;) What worldbuilding details are you guys wrestling with right now?
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No big world-building for me right now, just my third Hallmark. My only challenge is I know I've miscalculated my countdown to Christmas, and I think I've said it's Christmas eve on two different days. 😅
Quick question for the writers here...
So I hit 50,000 words on Remnant Chronicles through the NANOWRIMO - first novella done, halfway through the second. Feels good. Right now it's with an editor doing verification and clarification work, mostly around the theological/mythological stuff I'm layering in. This is my first time working with an editor on fiction (I've done tons of docuseries TV, but that's totally different), and honestly I'm still figuring out how this is supposed to work. Which got me wondering - do you guys use editors? And if so, how do you actually work with them? Like: - What does your workflow look like? Send chapters as you go or full manuscript? - How many passes do you typically do? - Do you find this part fun or is it just the necessary slog before you can publish? I'm trying to figure out if I need multiple editors for different things (structure vs line edits vs copy) or if one person handles it all. Right now mine is focused on keeping the world-building consistent and making sure my post-rapture theology actually tracks, but I suspect I'll need someone else to look at pacing. Anyway - curious how you all handle this stage. What's working for you?
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That's fantastic, Miles! Congrats. What a huge accomplishment. I did NaNo once, and it was a great experience. As you know, I'm the fiction editor at a literary magazine, and deal with all the short fiction. I've also gone halfway on my ed's certificate at SFU (I love everything to do with words, but tables of contents and footnotes are NOT for me), and have learned multiple editors are often used for an MS. But sometimes the right ed can do it all. At the mag, we mostly take stories that are ready. Occasionally we'll work with an author who is close, but the story is too good to pass up and I see the potential fix. If the author is ready and willing to work together, I'll do a substantive edit, looking at story, pacing: all the fun stuff. When that's ready, we hand it off to our brilliant long-time copy editor. She'll find all those pesky, well-hidden grammar, spelling, usage mistakes, fact-checking—and more. Interestingly, she doesn't like the creative. She's an absolute gem. Six years at the mag, two at the Manitoba Writers' Guild, I can tell you, many, MANY people are looking for the editor who does it all. And it has to be the right fit of editor. As for me, as I'm working on screenplay right now, because of my years in theatre, when I have what I think is a good draft, I order food and drink, and invite a house full of actors to do a read. I know some smarties, and they give the most incisive crit. After the next draft, I hire fancy script ed's for coverage. Between the two, I've brought my current screenplay to it's best form yet. It takes a village.
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