So glad you arrived safely. Enjoy your holiday!

Safe travels and Merry Christmas! Enjoy your family time and much needed rest.

@Mary Wilmer yes. Our thoughts and emotions all live someplace in our body, whether it’s excitement or stress. We have the ability as spiritual beings to view where this stored energy resides and manipulate it. I really love this exercise Mara Lee is going to be leading where you take a subject that feels sometimes outside of yourself, like in this case money, and view it as its own Spiritual being to learn from. It’s all in viewing from a soulful perspective. 💕

@Mary Wilmer

Hi Barbara! My eyes keep shutting (so exhausted) but I want to give you some brief feedback, then come back tomorrow after a deeper dive. My very first impression from the first line is Ai, not your voice. All the phrases, the emdashes (lose those). It lacks YOU and your unique fingerprint and message. I also don't understand the message of your first page. They are nice words but aren't clear enough to pull me in. Page 2. Yes! Now I see who are talking to. Bring this higher up! Here are some core focus questions for you and your landing page. What do you want someone to feel when working with you? Put that front and center. Sell them the idea of what they are striving for. What will they receive and feel like after working with you? What makes you unique? Don't be afraid to put your personality in there, because that's what will sell. You are selling you and this is their first look at who you are. Right now I met with GPT. Personally, I have never resonated with this common trend of writing I see lately (GPT style) of telling me what I experienced, and then saying what I could get. Or telling me what I am not. I had a recent coach tell me that as the potential client is reading, they need to say YES! three times while reading to resonate and book a session/call. This can be done by literally asking questions that make you say yes in your head. Like "Have you ever?" Honestly, the Who is the Homecoming Perfect For page does this quite well, but it's buried too far down. My other tip is there is a lot of therapy language. Make the language more conversational and relatable. How would your client describe what they are going through. Use the language that they would, so when they read they say "that's me!" There were several statements all over that I thought "sounds nice, but I don't know what that means." When I get to the bottom at your bio, I finally start to see what makes you, you, but it's buried at the bottom and I want to understand you better way sooner.

@Barbara Guimaraes ok, great! It’s a long webpage and it didn’t feel possible to go over the pros and cons of each thing in a comment. I will definitely create a Loom for you. My day is pretty full tomorrow, but I can get it done by tomorrow night, latest.

@Andrew Jules dude. You’re first EVERYWHERE 🤣

@Blue Mojo