@Jayden Phan I see that you are working with some basic underdrawing construction on the face, but I don’t see any measuring lines for eyes, or mouth or nose, just the overall circle shape. I think watching some of the art hacks I have on the head, proportions and head angles will really help you out as you keep practicing! Thanks for posting!

@Tasha Jeffcoat the volume of the hair definitely reads, especially with the breakup of the silhouette on the hair as a whole. I would still suggest picking a few larger areas and using those as your base forms for the chunks of curls, and then add slight details and contour lines in those bigger chunks so it doesn’t just look like a bunch of squiggly lines all over the place competing with each other. Find the larger chunks and the wavy flow of the hair so the strands aren’t fighting against each other.

@Andrés Zapatero that’s definitely a pretty crazy fast pace! I definitely like to get through my pencil phase quickly as well so I can get into the inks! Looking forward to seeing these once they get inked and closer to finished.

@Kenzie Alexander I agree with @Daniel Chon about the cheeks and jawline. Softening the angles of the jaw below the ear and the chin to be more rounded will help to emphasize the feminine, as well as making the nose slightly rounder and less pointy. Even though there is so much variety in faces, drawing sharp angular features on a woman can definitely push her too masculine

@Olivier De landsheere I really like these simplified heads! You captured some really good emotions in the simple sketches, so well done!