Okay, so I redid the hair... I don't hate it, but it still feels like a lazy result.

Are the spots too much? I feel like they're distracting.

This is what I have so far. The hair and shirt are making me sad. I've watched so many tutorials and I just can't seem to replicate the process. @N. Colin Dyer , I saw your comment about the tail after I had already started coloring.

I have no idea what I'm doing in Procreate, but this is what I have so far. This is the second entry in my bestiary. How can I make this better?

I've decided that I'm going to draw the cover of my next novella. This is the FMC, Charlotte. I kinda gave up on the hair, but it'll hopefully look better when I paint it.