Can I get some critiques for improvement

This mask method looks awesome! The only thing I'm struggling with is making both eyes look right. I know I should keep an eye on the corners lining up for the perspective, but maybe there are other tricks? Anyway, I think this method is going to work really well for me — I just need more practice! 😁

I don’t know if it’s good or not since I don’t really know how to color.