@Nikhil Chand hope you wrote it for an actual client, overall its good, 1 problem I caught was the WIIFM was missing, its a major problem, people won't read the whole email until they know exactly what they are getting from it

@John Cripps looks like you wrote an ad script or a post as a free lead magnet to get people to the email list, right? Some mistakes are: 1st of all remove the words hey firstname, how will you know the firstname? If its a video and is meant for all people, how does that make any sense, 2nd is that you mentioned Ben told you about this email writing, who cares? No one knows Ben, tell the audience who Ben is, like Ben, the greatest marketer of all time, who has a marketing agency generating millions of dollars per month, told me this method. Also tell the people what results you got from emails, because everyone can write emails from ai, and claim they are good, but have you actually tested it yourself and have gotten the results yourself, or are you just a talker who haven't achieved any results from the method you are giving to others

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@Sajid Mahbub no man you dont have to pay for the software,the client will pay for it. And the answer to 2nd question is that you write your copy in Google docs,and then send the client the link to Google docs. EXPLAINATION : If you are a copywriter, you will write emails in Google docs and send the link of Google docs(with copy in it) to the client. If you are an email marketer, client will already have the copy with him, he will also have a paid software to send emails. The client will give you the software's password to login and tell you in which sequence he wants to send emails,by how much time intervals, and to whom as well. The goal is to become a copywriter and an email marketer as well (email marketing is super easy,you can learn it all in just 2 hours,no practice required). If you are a copy writer and an email marketer as well, then the client will happily pay you 4k per month, because you are saving him time, effort, headache. Reason is that, now instead of dealing, telling, guiding, paying and checking on 2 different people,all the work is done by 1 person (who is a copywriter and an email marketer as well) That's why tyson emphasis on skill stacking

@Levi Prentice don't go below 10k. They don't have spare cash around to give you. 10k followers is least. 10k to 100k followers is the optimum range.

@Sakid Hussain damn bro,even as your 1st email,it's great,although it needs alot of tweaks,but eventually you will get there,1st of all the email is good,but the SL can be punchier,you used a good set of words that most girls use and you did pretty good job on talking like the girls want to talk to,that great,another thing that can be improved is the body,explain a bit more about the problem ,overall its good

@Young Tina write free Value only for the warm leads,and make it your goal to write 2 free values each day. You need to send 1 free value a month only. By writing 2 free value daily, you'll be able to send free value to 60 prospects in a month. And there is a high chance of closing 1 person out of 60 prospects(who already know you,and you are giving them value)