I checked out some of the active members and oh boy everyone is way older and experienced and it shows in thier writings, i hope to reach similar level one day.
Here's one confessional piece that shows my writing style and structure nicely in short length. I'll be happy to have some reviews.
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How did the man who caged the parrot felt?
Did he ever realised he had caged her?
Did he never thought to himself "I shall release it?"
Did he loved her?
Yet kept her caged?
Is it because deep down he knew, he could never make her stay
Just with the care he could muster?
Did he loved so much yet couldn't love at all?