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I checked out some of the active members and oh boy everyone is way older and experienced and it shows in thier writings, i hope to reach similar level one day. Here's one confessional piece that shows my writing style and structure nicely in short length. I'll be happy to have some reviews. {No name yet} How did the man who caged the parrot felt? Did he ever realised he had caged her? Did he never thought to himself "I shall release it?" Did he loved her? Yet kept her caged? Is it because deep down he knew, he could never make her stay Just with the care he could muster? Did he loved so much yet couldn't love at all?
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@Hannah Cardamone haha The most consistent review I've ever gotten is my grammatical mistakes because I can never notice them myself. Thanks for the insight on how it made you feel, glad my poetry is having an effect. I'll try to fix that in the future! Thankss
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@Marco Avila okay repetition, and less abstract phrasing. Got it. I'll take that into account next time I'm writing. Thankyou. I do have a habit of indirectness so it sure adds to it. Thanks for the thorough review again!
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Hi everyone, this is Wahed. A friend once told me my way of writing was poetic, and I have been crafting poetry ever since. I try to write essays and prose as well. My two main goals here, -to have a (small) community of people who support eachother and critique honestly and upfront. -learn to polish/edit my writings since I have trouble with doing that. That will be all thank you admins for letting me in and I can't wait to settle down!!
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