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Helloooo 🥳🥳🥳

Morning guys.

Last nights call was really great. And it was so nice to meet everyone. The scripts that David went over- guys. They were amazing.

Although a little stuck on the 4th draft of my treatment. I didn’t want to let it block me through a creative spark. So I thought I would

Write at least the opening scene of my script

Through out my whole process before even writing the first draft. I picked apart the movie The Crow ( 2024 version - with bill skarsgard) . As tone wise. That’s present in my movie. I’ve watched it soo many times. And I wrote a beat sheet for it. That helped me get through my first draft. I worry now that the set up /structure is too close to the crow. I think that’s why I am going around in circles with my treatment. As I want my movie to stand alone with hints of the movies that have inspired it 🫣

But I thought I’d share the opening scene with you all as I am rewatching for the 100000th time ( I love this movie but can’t find the script ) as I think it’s quite a powerful opening scene.

( imagine as a horse girl though - actually the first time I put this movie on a few weeks ago i actually turned it off. Horses and dogs dying as the first scene 😭. So glad I found this movie though. It’s easily become a favourite)

I hope you’re all well. And having a fabulous day. I can’t wait to see what you all get up to.

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