This one is about getting the reader to relate to the character by having the character feel, see, hear, etc. It went long again because I try to fix a sentence at the end. If you want to skip that part, I'll understand.

A lesson on how not to write an opening.

Sorry this one got a little long. It is me editing. I hope you get something out of it.

In this Live Lesson I compare my original opening for my first book that I published on Amazon to my 2nd edition still unpublished as yet. Hopefully you can see the difference as better.

This one is about poetry.