had a great question about a demo reel storyboard. Here's my video reply! Condensed Summary of Feedback for Dr. Anna Thomas' Demo Reel:
1- Structure for Impact:
- Follow the Perfect Demo Reel Blueprint (Hook, Intrigue, Problem, Mentor, Transformation).
- Restructure to build tension before introducing yourself.
2- Stronger Hook & Relevance:
- End the hook at “breaking point”—don’t introduce yourself too early.
- Move “One in three caregivers leave their jobs” and “Silver Tsunami” sooner for stronger impact.
- Call out key decision-makers earlier to make the problem feel urgent.
3- Visual & Audio Enhancements:
- Start with live footage of yourself speaking (if possible).
- Limit to 2-3 music changes for smoother flow.
4- Position Yourself as the Mentor:
- Once introduced, shift focus to how you solve the problem.
- Highlight transformation stories and social proof early.
5- Clarity & Messaging:
- Avoid text-heavy visuals while speaking—keep it clean and engaging.
- Replace “Here’s what I speak on” with a clear framework or method.
Final Thoughts:
Great foundation! A few structural tweaks will improve engagement and impact.