I'd love to get some feedback on the first version of my VSL. Fire away! 🔥 https://www.skool.com/standout-stylist

I'm here to fix the ads haha Zup Amigos! My CTR is good, about 8%, but my Link CTR has been dropping lately and is now down to 1.1%. so I thought I'd approach the same creatives with another primary text. I'm curious: What feedback do you have on my storytelling in this text? ----------------👇 I used to never miss a workout, and staying focused was easy. But something changed. You see, I finished college in half the time, ran 100-mile races, and survived as a bomb disposal officer. But, after leaving the army, I lacked discipline. And my physical appearance was "fluffier" than ever before. (let’s leave it at that, haha). I was in a downward spiral—working out less and procrastinating more. The frustrating part? I knew exactly what I should be doing. I tried the same things as you. Setting goals, building habits, and getting accountability buddies. It worked… for a few weeks. Then, life would get in the way—a trip, a late night, or a bad day—and my routines would fall apart. Restarting? That often didn’t happen. Eventually, I realized the real difference between my army life and now… It wasn’t the techniques or the strategies. It was something deeper. I had forgotten the single most important skill: mental strength. Our mind is what drives us to do the work. Even when we don’t understand the purpose or simply don’t want to— We do it Just because we said we would. If discipline were as simple as “just do it,” we’d all have unbreakable minds. And nobody would ever let themselves down. But as you know, it’s much more difficult than that. Mental strength is like a muscle—it needs training. If we don’t train it, it becomes weak. And when that happens, we default to what’s easiest, not what’s most beneficial. Look around, and you’ll see this everywhere. At your local subway, people stand in line waiting for the escalator. Even though taking the stairs is just as fast and healthier. "The easy way." is their default! When I decided to get back into mental shape, I looked for a training program that could help me.

Do I need to do a separate script for the creatives? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jcT_UGBLZWRTfX6MSqlJD8Y6ypOL9VhcSDEOJX85YAw/edit?usp=sharing This is my first time, so please don't hold back and please be brutal

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Here's the 1st draft of my VSL script, would love to get feedback on the copy and ways to improve this for my community: https://www.skool.com/standout-stylist/about Goal: Refine the script, and then record the 1st version ASAP. Script (1st Draft): Hairstylists, do you ever feel like you’re putting so much effort into Instagram, but it’s NOT helping your business grow? You’re posting, showing off your work, and trying to stay consistent, but your page feels stuck. Meanwhile, other stylists are using Instagram to attract dream clients, go viral, and build their brands, and you’re left asking yourself, 'What am I missing?' I’ve worked with so many talented hairstylists who felt exactly the same way. They were ambitious and they had the talent, but Instagram JUST wasn’t translating into the results they wanted. After years of studying Instagram and testing different strategies, I discovered one simple truth: it’s not about working harder and spending MORE hours on the platform; it’s actually about working smarter and creating content that’s easy to make and stay consistent with. And when you focus on what actually works, EVERYTHING CHANGES. Now, I want to share with you the exact strategies I’ve used to help hairstylists grow their Instagram pages, connect with other professionals, and finally turn their effort into real results. These aren’t complicated tactics or hacks that only work temporarily. These are proven systems designed to save you time, boost your engagement, and help you build a stronger, more connected business online. Here’s what some stylists are already saying: Amber shared, 'I’ve been engaging with lots of different pages, and the results have been amazing! My audience has grown over 100 followers in just a week, and I’ve gotten new downloads of my book without even pitching it to anyone.' Leah said, 'Standout Stylist has been a game changer! From sharing experiences to asking for help, I’ve found a community of stylists who care for their craft and want to maximize their business potential. The tools Ryan provides have helped me take my social media to the next level.'