😨Christmas has made my waist expand and made my ads retract...👇

Gabriel von Knorring

Jan 15 • 🪞Copy Reviews

I'm here to fix the ads haha

Zup Amigos!

My CTR is good, about 8%, but my Link CTR has been dropping lately and is now down to 1.1%.

so I thought I'd approach the same creatives with another primary text.

I'm curious: What feedback do you have on my storytelling in this text?

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I used to never miss a workout, and staying focused was easy. But something changed.

You see, I finished college in half the time, ran 100-mile races, and survived as a bomb disposal officer.

But, after leaving the army, I lacked discipline.

And my physical appearance was "fluffier" than ever before.

(let’s leave it at that, haha).

I was in a downward spiral—working out less and procrastinating more.

The frustrating part?

I knew exactly what I should be doing.

I tried the same things as you.

Setting goals, building habits, and getting accountability buddies.

It worked… for a few weeks.

Then, life would get in the way—a trip, a late night, or a bad day—and my routines would fall apart.

Restarting?

That often didn’t happen.

Eventually, I realized the real difference between my army life and now…

It wasn’t the techniques or the strategies.

It was something deeper.

I had forgotten the single most important skill: mental strength.

Our mind is what drives us to do the work.

Even when we don’t understand the purpose or simply don’t want to—

We do it Just because we said we would.

If discipline were as simple as “just do it,” we’d all have unbreakable minds.

And nobody would ever let themselves down.

But as you know, it’s much more difficult than that.

Mental strength is like a muscle—it needs training.

If we don’t train it, it becomes weak.

And when that happens, we default to what’s easiest, not what’s most beneficial.

Look around, and you’ll see this everywhere.

At your local subway, people stand in line waiting for the escalator.

Even though taking the stairs is just as fast and healthier.

"The easy way." is their default!

When I decided to get back into mental shape, I looked for a training program that could help me.

But all I found were inspirational stories from people like David Goggins.

But nobody would show me HOW to build that mental strength.

So, I created my own training program.

I invited eight friends to join.

And in December 2024, the Unbreakable Mind Mental Strength Challenge was born.

It's designed to stop you from procrastinating on the things you know you should be doing.

It worked so well that I decided to offer it for free to the public.

(What's in it for me? It´s to attract like-minded people who could become clients in the future)

Click the link below to learn about the

Free 7-Day Mental Strength Challenge.

https://sancusleadership.kit.com/msc

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