Can I get a side of honest feedback please? · Pick Your Online Business

Can I get a side of honest feedback please?

I just finished my Skool About page and I’d love some honest feedback.

The first slide will be a short clickable VSL — planning to record it this weekend, assuming I can squeeze in a haircut 💇🏻 and finish a couple client edits.

Huge shoutout to

@Brian O'Neill

— I reworked the copy and group description based on the notes from our About Page Live Review Session inside the Pick One Project Skool community. The clarity from that session helped a lot.

Before I lock it in, I’d genuinely love a few extra eyes on it.

What’s one thing you’d improve or change?

Check it out here:https://www.skool.com/story-engine-4401/about

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