Content update :
Still not sure about the last page. I don't feel so good about CTA...
Thanks for your time
big Love
Hi tribe,
Have been working of this piece of content. Would love some feedback :
- Do you read it through or let go at the middle?
- Should I rearrange the reasons (maybe some more catchy are at the end and would be better up)
- Is the CTA relevant?
- Does it sound like "I'm gonna teach you how to live?" or more like a gentle "Hey, it's ok, look, it can be fun and liberating". I'm trying to get rid of my bossy "know it all" way of expressing myself 😇
Thanks for your time and energy and hope this lands with y'all
🤍