Need some feedback on my DM script

My current DM script is only getting 3 positive replies every 100 DM's. This is my script:

M1: Can new people start at any time during the month?

M2: Great well I found you guys on google maps and was curious if that’s allowed because I’ve been looking for another school to send 10-35 extra students to throughout every month using Reels ads. You only pay us if they sign up. Would you like some more info on what that would look like?

Around 50 percent reply to the first message. I'm in the martial arts niche btw. Any help is appreciated.

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