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The Secret That Makes a Chapter Actually Work

Hi everyone,

Finally, a bit of rest. I was away last week, not on holiday, but my job is becoming more complicated every week. So, welcome to the new era, where now basically you have to be an AI in flash and bones for your boss. ahah anyway, we talk about this in another topic.

Dear authors,

let me address something I see all the time.

A writer has the whole story in their head (or almost), but when they sit down, everything pours into one giant chapter, and then they freeze.

They do not know yet how to break the story into pieces that move.

There is a principle that fixes this, and it comes from Robert McKee, who taught most of the screenwriters you might admire.

The principle is brutal in its simplicity. Every scene must turn.

right?

If it does not turn, it does not belong.

Here is what "turn" means.

At the start of a scene, some value in your character's life has a charge. Positive or negative. Safe or threatened. Hopeful or despairing. Loved or abandoned.

By the end of that scene, that charge must have flipped.

If your character begins the chapter hopeful and ends it hopeful, with nothing changed, then nothing happened, no matter how much talking and moving around fill the page.

McKee has a merciless question for that kind of scene.

Why is it in your story at all?

His answer is usually that it exists only to deliver information, and a disciplined writer weaves that information in elsewhere and cuts the scene.

So here is the practical tool.

Take the chapter you are stuck on. Ask one question at the top: what does my character value here, and is it charged positive or negative?

Write it down.

Then go to the end of the chapter and ask the same thing. If the charge is identical, your chapter is not finished, it is inert.

Change something.

Let the news arrive, let the door slam, let the truth come out. Turn it.

And this is also how you find your next chapter.

The turn at the end of one scene creates the question that pulls the reader, and you, into the next. A chapter that ends "she trusted him completely" opens a very different door than one that ends "she saw the letter and understood he had been lying for years."

The turn is the engine.

Chapter after chapter, each one flipping a value, is how a story builds all the way to an ending instead of collapsing into a pile of events.

Try it on one chapter today. Note the charge at the start, note it at the end. If they match, you have found exactly what to fix. 👇

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The Secret That Makes a Chapter Actually Work