1️⃣ First 2 lines
- Jo banda unke exact problem ko repeat + solve karta hai, wahi jeetta hai.
- ❌ “I am a professional…”
- ✅ “I saw you need XYZ — I’ve solved this exact issue before.”
2️⃣ Proof > Claims
- Screenshots, links, results.
- ❌ “I have 5 years experience”
- ✅ “I helped a client increase XYZ by 37% (link).”
3️⃣ Short & Skimmable
- 6–10 lines max.
- Bullets > paragraphs.
- Time nahi hota unke paas.
4️⃣ Clear Next Step
- “If this sounds right, I can start today / share a quick plan.”
- Confidence, not begging.
5️⃣ English Simple + Direct
- Fancy English ❌
- Clear, simple, human English ✅
Unhein ye cheezen bilkul pasand nahi ❌
- Copy-paste proposals
- Over-polite begging tone
- Long stories about yourself
- Generic templates
ONE-LINE SECRET:
Client proposal nahi, solution scan karta hai.