How to write the high score essay?

6d • IELTS

I attend tutoring sessions about three times a week. Recently, I have been asking my tutor how to write a high-scoring IELTS essay. I questioned the relevance of certain arguments because I wasn't satisfied with the model answers I found.

My tutor gave me an example: if the topic is Global Warming and the prompt asks “What can people do to address this issue?”and I argue that 'Schools should offer courses on environmental friendly , the tutor says this won't get a high score because the subject is wrong.

Does anyone agree with this commend?

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