MDM/Perfect Offer Messaging Audit please

Hi. I came up with following messaging alternatives below and would appreciate some feedback:

"I help automation companies, plant engineering firms and B2B companies in the industry sector generate 3x more clients every month without additional overhead costs or additional time investment"

"I help automation companies, plant engineering firms and B2B companies in the industry sector constantly generate 3 clients a month in 90 days over the Internet without additional overhead costs or time wasting marketing efforts"

"I help automation companies, plant engineering firms and B2B companies in the industry sector generate as many clients in 90 days as they do in a year without additional overhead costs or additional time investment"

"I help automation companies, plant engineering firms and B2B companies in the industry sector increase their revenue by 50% in 6 months without additional overhead costs or more stress"

Thanks in advance..

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