Help in choice of wording needed · Growthworks Community

Adel Kassouri

Jun '23 (edited) • General Discussion

Help in choice of wording needed

Help in choice of wording needed.

Positive day all. I hope you all well.

For my lead magnet and low ticket offer (to get people on board), I'm lost between three choices:

Get more clients by launching a micro offer in 72h* or less without tech overwhelm, complicated tools, and BS strategies.
Generate more revenue by launching a micro offer in 72h* or less without tech overwhelm, complicated tools, and BS strategies.
Get more clients aka revenue by launching a micro offer in 72h* or less without tech overwhelm, complicated tools, and BS strategies.

Obviously, there is this line just under the headline:

* 72h or less if you are an online business savvy, maybe more if you are a total beginner.

Questions:

A. Is it too much of a promise to use the 72h? Knowing that I will provide a fast step-by-step action plan + Video (authority amplifier) to explain what they should do with the timing to do each step.

B. Which one you prefer?

Note: Aaron always say he is an total geek, well, he never met me lol

Thank you in advance.

Adel

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