I watched the lessons on paragraphs from Ninja Writing. It got me thinking about reading on mobile. When considering the best visual use of paragraphs, how should we consider those who read using smartphones? Should I think about what device the audience would most likely use to read the article?

One of my goals is to become an editor. My publication has a peer editing system—everyone is an editor. I like this because it allows me to practice, particularly the human side of the process. But over the years, I've stopped editing other people's work. I've become discouraged seeing my peers mostly look only for basic grammar and spelling, while I consistently look at everything. I wish they would scrutinize my work the way I do mine. I understand they have their own articles to finish and proper editing takes time, but I feel like the odd one out for making detailed editing suggestions and potentially making their lives harder. What are some thoughts on how I should handle this?

If anybody has questions about writing with AI, feel free to ask here or message me directly. I will address them in due course. As my book on the subject nears completion, I am excited about sharing all that I’ve learned. :)

I use AI for my research, writing, and/or editing...

“I was devastated. When I say devastated, I mean I could barely speak for months,” writes Britney in her memoir The Woman in Me. “I lay in my bed and stared at the ceiling.” When she turned to her family for support, she was disappointed. “I felt like I had no one to talk to.” In the above passage, the first sentence of the second para can be structured differently: She was disappointed to find even her family unsupportive. "I felt like I had no one to talk to." Which version is better? The first or the second? In the first version, while framing that sentence, I take into consideration the logical progression from her staring at the ceiling to her turning to her family. In the second version, I focus on that sentence in isolation to make it better. @Shani Raja Which approach is recommended? Working with sentences in isolation to make them better? Or paying more heed to what comes before or after? I grapple with this puzzle often. I hope u understood what I am saying :)