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Context: It's a cold outreach email SL: Saw your website, @AdrianViral. Hey Adrian, Just looked over your Adrian Viral AI Marketing website. And seriously, I’m telling you, you’ve got great base on your other social platforms Except your website, because it is very generic and it has no clear value proposition. And the biggest flag: your email also didn’t arrive in my inbox within 2 hours. This can happen because of a lack of technical setup, poor content engagement, and the list goes on… I figured out 3–5 things regarding your website. Lmk if you’re down to know more, and if not, no hard feelings. (Reply “Not Interested” to unsubscribe from my emails.)
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SL: If you avoid frontloading, this is your fate PV: The one move everyone ignores, yet it’s the only thing that works %FIRSTNAME%, If you’re scared to put money on the table… Or scared to grind from 0 to 1 with zero proof you’ll win… Then you fall into one of three buckets: - Broke. - No long-term plan. - Not serious. If that’s you, cool, just close the email. But if you’re still here, let’s hit the uncomfortable truth: Your obsession with short-term ROI is destroying your potential. And before you scream “basic business principles,” relax. ROI matters. But chasing it too early? That’s how people stay stuck forever. I know it’s rough when you’re starting out. I know every dollar matters when bills are breathing down your neck. But nobody said this game was supposed to be easy. High performers all share one thing: they think long-term. One of the youngest 9-figure entrepreneurs I know, my age, once told me: “Every decision you make today shows up 90 days from now.” That’s the mindset that separates winners from spectators. And here’s the part no one wants to hear: Average thinkers optimize the next 30 days. Winners optimize the next 3 years. Look at the giants: Amazon lost billions before becoming Amazon. Uber torched money before owning the market. Tesla still has unstable profits, yet they rewrote the auto industry. See the pattern? Success punishes the impatient. Whether you’re Elon building rockets… Or a college student trying to land their first copywriting client… The principle never changes: Frontload now. Eat the losses. Let the payoff come later. Maybe that means: Dropping a few thousand on a copy course. Grinding 30–90 days with zero replies. Sending emails into the void. Stacking effort, time, and money, with nothing to show. Until one random day… Someone says yes. The door cracks open. And the whole game flips. That moment only comes to people who frontload. Have the guts to stay in the dark long enough to hit the light.
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SL: Can’t speak English fluently? Jake couldn’t either… SL: Why the hell can’t I speak properly?” (A true story) SL: The love-hate relationship is real. Quick question, (name): ever get frustrated and say, "Why the hell can’t I speak properly?” Same with my student Jake. For the last 2 months, Jake has been trying to impress his date by speaking fluent English (#goals)... But every time, He stumbled. He just couldn’t get the words out smoothly. Then he tried my new English Speaking Formula™—and everything changed. Now he says it’s truly transformative. In fact, he’s already using it in everyday conversations. If speaking feels like a challenge for you too, Then, you’re one click away from speaking like a native. Steal my English study formula for free. (link) Talk Soon, Gaby
[For Critique] A Rusty Comeback lol
SL: This is why you’re not recovering fast. PV: The real reason you're tired by set 3. Hey %FIRSTNAME%, Every drop of sweat feels rewarding, but are you giving your body what it truly needs? You finish your second set… drenched, breathing heavy, heart pounding. You grab your jug, take a long pull of cold water... and feel good. But that refreshing feeling? It’s not enough. Here’s why: Cold water only gives you temporary relief, not the recovery your body actually needs. Under the surface? Your muscles crave lost nutrients, your cells are dry, and your nerves are misfiring, leaving you sluggish and unfocused. Recovery is already falling behind, before set 3 even starts. Why? Because water has: - No sodium to keep your muscles building and firing, - No potassium to stop cramps during your workout,  - No magnesium to regulate energy and speed up recovery. Bottom line? Just cold water that doesn’t care about speedy recovery, cuz it only gets you hydrated. That’s why most gains are lost, Not from the extra effort you put in, but because your body is working against you. Now, don’t get me wrong… I’m not saying u shouldn’t drink water anymore. Water is essential for hydration, but it’s just not enough for recovery and performance. That’s why you need more than just water… like a great-tasting hydration solution, packed with electrolytes and coconut water. Backed by science and trusted by athletes, like Jones here, who recovers 3x faster and is primed to break another PR with HYDREAU! (INSERT PROOF) HYDREAU is designed to deliver optimal hydration and recovery when you need it most. One scoop only. That’s all it takes to bounce back faster, stop cramps dead, and stay fueled when your body wants to quit. Your body’s been asking for more. Don’t let your progress slip… Not because of your effort, but because of what you didn’t give. Grab your HYDREAU here. Peace out, Xplosiv
I need Help Finding an Offer!
I’ve just been reading the first lessons on picking an offer, and I was just wondering, is it possible to offer yourself as the product in the form of services? I have a huge amount of experience, writing, different forms of copy, from sales pages, to articles. I’ve owned my own niche websites, which grew to over 150,000 visitors a month, and earn over 10k per month with a 14% click through rate to Amazon affiliates. I’ve also helped a game company get over 4 million app downloads for their games by writing content and ad copy. I also, increased WebtrafficGeeks from 3k a month to 20k a month. In 12 months, by rewriting the landing page, A/B testing ex. And that’s just a bit of the experience I have. I’ve gained work through Upwork in the past, but it’s joke of a website now. And I’d prefer to activity instead of passively get leads by reaching out to them. But I’m not too sure what service I could offer. Or, for the duration of this course, is it better to just pick an existing high performing affiliate product, such as on Gumroad, that I can just keep pushing? Thank you all for your help.
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