This is an instrumental composition I am working right now it is almost good enough quality just a few tweaks. It should translate but no guarantee yet. If you like this song please give feedback I am building the glass harp for this piece but all parts played and composed by me

Do you think I should leave the introductions as Walsh and Frizzly talking to the audience before the professor comes on? (Professor I.B. Nerdly joins them for this story as a guest narrator.) Or should I have them start to introduce the show, be interrupted by the professor's arrival, and introduce themselves to him? I've had Act I written for a long time, but I'm dividing it into shorts about 30-60 seconds long to manageably record it as a micro-drama with probably 1 short released per week. Two stars** mean the end of a short. Script preview in comments (opening/introduction).

Cinderella and the Fairy Oddfather: An Offer She Can’t Refuse (or Can She?) What Will She Do for a New Glass Shoe? A comedic twist on the classic tale, as adapted by John Andrew Lang and Kris Jim Murdock Chapter 1: The Royal Invitation Work, toil, sweat! Work, toil, sweat! Never done, never good enough. Would it never end? Once upon a time, there was a girl named Ella who had no time to do anything except chores day in and day out for her stepsisters and stepmother, who never did any work themselves and never showed any appreciation for her help. She barely even had time to sleep at night. It had been that way ever since her father’s death. Without him around to stand up for her, the stepmother and stepsisters made her do everything around the house, including cleaning the ashes and cinders from the fireplace. She always got cinders all over her dress, her hands, her feet, and even her face, just like confetti at a birthday party. Except she never got invited to birthday parties. And it wasn’t bright and colorful; it was dingy and dirty and messy. And nobody picked it up and threw it at her like confetti. They were mean enough to, but they didn’t want to get their own hands dirty. Sometimes one of the stepsisters picked up the whole cinder bucket and dumped it on her, though, which meant not only that poor Ella was even filthier than before, but also that she had to redo all her fireplace cleaning. Then both stepsisters and the stepmother chuckled and chortled and cackled and gackled and hooted and hollered with laughter until their faces turned as red as sunburnt lobsters in the Red Sea (if it were actually red). and tears ran down their faces. And down her face, too, of course. But then sometimes that stepsister laughed so hard, she fell over and rolled on the floor, getting cinders all over herself. Then Cinderella, in spite of having such a kind heart, couldn’t help laughing, which, of course, made the stepsister furious. “It’s your fault for being so ugly and so fun to tease! I just couldn’t help dumping that bucket of cinders on you and laughing! Now I’ll go upstairs to change, and I’ll toss this dress down to you. Oh, and you better get it clean as a whistle, dry as a bone, and smooth as silk in five minutes or less!”

I'd love feedback and critique on this. Remember the old "fractured fairy tales" you read and watched growing up? By God's grace, I'm determined to push through my fears and go forward with the new Walsh Frizzly Productions, including a series of humorous stories largely based on classic tales but with Godly lessons, often hosted by Walsh Washington Carver (the World's Wisest Elephant) and Frizzly Frezziwig Farver (the Forest's Funniest Monkey, who also happens to be a barber...AKA a real "cut-up"). I'm happy, excited, and as nervous as a tin cat on a hot roof full of rocking chairs, 😂 but posting it helps with accountability in going forward. One story in the works, as a collaboration with John Andrew Lang, is "Cinderella and the Fairy Oddfather: An Offer She Can't Refuse (Or Can She?)" Is the whimsical Fairy Oddfather the practically angelic helper he seems to be, or just the opposite? Here's a template I'd like to use. Please ignore the placeholder text.

Which name should I give my script? (Act I perusal link in comments.)