I "magically" downloaded the DIOMEDES LAUNCH TRAILER
Been bashing my brain for days to figure out how to do the launch trailer for my upcoming novel "Diomedes of the War Cry"
Was driving home, when I got it ⚡️
One of the most heartbreaking moments in the Trojan War is the "arming scene" of Priam, the aged king of Troy.
Arming Scenes are a whole thing in the Iliad: the Achilles arming scene, the Agamemnon arming scene etc. are epic and powerful moments.
But the arming scene of Priam..is painful.
He sees his city burning, and he knows the Greeks will burst through his door at any moment.
He starts to don his breastplate, but the straps hang loose upon his old bones, bereft of vigor.
His sword belt sits askew on his aged hips.
He used to a fighter once.. but those days are only a memory now.
This is the perfect scene for my "Reveal Trailer"
The following monologue is from Priam to his daughter Cassandra (the prophetess)
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Scene: Priam weeping as he puts on his armor for the last time, and speaking he says:
"Would that I heeded your warning, dear child.
I should never have let that cursed horse into our city.
Now, Troy burns because of me.
In my final moments, I have but one consolation..
That the men who did this to us, will know only suffering!
Shining Achilles, who killed my son Hector and dragged his body by his heels three times round the walls of Troy - he lays dead, never to return to his beloved father, Peleus.
The far ruling king, Agamemnon will return to his home in Mycenae only to be butchered like a pig by his own dear wife and her lover.
Mighty Ajax, who slaughtered so many of my men - died by his own hand, falling upon his own sword in shame for what he had done. His body a feast for dogs, crows and the flies.
Odysseus, cunning Odysseus - who is surely the architect of this foul trickery - thinks that he will return home after the conclusion of this war. Little does he know that ten years will pass as his ships and men are battered this way and that by the will of Poseidon.
And what of Diomedes - the man who raised his hand to strike at the immortal Gods!
Aphrodite's hand severed at the joint by his swift spear - the audacity!
I know he's out there, roving about the city - sword hand slick with the blood of my people.
He thinks he can find peace once this war is done, and his oath to Agamemnon is fulfilled. Fool!
No mortal can challenge the Gods and hope for peace..
It is only now...that his trial begins!"
[TITLE CINEMATIC: DIOMEDES OF THE WAR CRY]
[LAUNCHES JULY 17th]
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Lesson I learned from this:
This whole trailer script was written without revision straight from the dome..like magic!
Too easy, right?
I can just write the whole novel like this, using magic!
But no - magic is earned.
I've been poring over the ancient texts and research for days to get the right angle.
This is the loading phase.
Then, I took an easy day at the beach.
And then "magic" happens.
This is the output phase.
Creativity is like going to the gym:
You lift weights for a couple days and then take a rest day
Regards,
KR
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