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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BL9F3XX81yTs8_xSRF_Bufm9yJAyduEm-rc-xDutXSw/edit?tab=t.0#heading=h.np3md4a2v1y0 Here's the next rendition of the copy for The Pickleball Passport. The emails are positioned to getting these pickleball club operators to book a 15 minute meeting with us to discuss a collaboration. I've brought a reward on the other side of the meeting after a suggestion from @Blake Sims last week which is "Early Insights Report" and "Destination Shortlist," which may still need to be more pronounced in the copy. Ready to get this new campaign online. Let me know what y'all think. Appreciate any feedback.. LFG this week!!🚀
Cold email copy feedback, please
Using LGJ's Chat GPT to create some copy. It knows all about my niche (Roofers, UK), offer (AI Automation for sales, ops, marketing) and end goal (book a call or a 14 day trial). Would love some feedback. 3 pages. 1st example - I have their First Name. 2nd example - I dont have their name (from my data, can be hard to find for niche, not on LinkedIn). https://docs.google.com/document/d/1j_tYpCRIcCd5CRNnUVJOTcC0C0zI_BuhCupXZSQwRu8/edit?usp=sharing Thanks!
Copy feedback request #304 hand-written letter this time!
here's the link https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dpShffKP-bLwdGHw8wtbh0LuVlwQC0C_NfGqZYoEa7M/edit?usp=sharing appreciate any feedback.
Feedback for my copy - high ticket coaches
Happy for any and all feedback on this copy for coaches in Australia. Offer: a chatbot on the coaches landing page trained on their services/philosophy that qualifies and books in leads instantly. Potentially also creating personalised lead magnets for each lead and sending to their email. The call to action is for them to reply demo or book in a meeting. My system will then create a personalised chatbot and website hosting it automatically within 30 seconds. It will then reply with the link. Then they try it, see it works and I am serious, then book a call hopefully from the page (calendar link on the page). https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EsTEtT_ZG04S8jZkZz8syAALinJvJrl04hwHv1Aw_Bw/edit?usp=sharing
Cold Email Copy Feedback
@Subrat Behera's enthusiasm has rubbed-off on me and I've taken massive action this weekend. I've built a 1.1k lead list that's cleaned and double verified thanks to great ChatGPT prompting, Instantly and Million Verifier. We're ready for launch ASAP but would love some feedback on our 1st email copy before that.... ....T-minus 20 hours till launch.🚀 Here's our 1st email copy with my two different subject lines for split testing: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NiaDRNmxHZ-KSPzn_PPqCSPSlC2ENuwLxEIJj3Hykms/edit?usp=sharing Any feedback is highly encouraged and appreciated. Thanks y'all! Cheers!
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